The Spectacular Stick

Spectacular Stick

Since the start of the term we have been learning about persuasive writing. This week we were trying to persuade people to buy a stick, I know you think it's goofy but hey it's worth a shot. I hope you like my writing and comment on it. I learn't about the things you need in a persuasive writing, for example you need an opinion, an ending statement and three reasons.

Are you looking for that final touch? That perfect gift or even a friend? Then buy this sticktastic, one of a kind stick. You can use it as Harry Potter's new wand, walking stick or a lightsabre. This stick is made out of 99% real wood with 1% brain power. Did you know that a stick can be a helpful tool, could save you and you can use them as chopsticks? They are three reasons that you should buy a sticktastic buddy.

Did you know that if you buy a stick then they can help you? They can help you if you're old because it can your walking stick. Another way that it can help you is because if you are in a comfortable position and you want to change the channel then you could pick up your stick and press the buttons. It can be your own channel changer.

Another reason why I think you should get a sticktastic buddy is because they can save you like a superhero going to kick butt. One way that a stick can save you is if you are in a battle it can pretend to be a lightsabre. Another way that it can save you is if you are old then it could save you from falling.

The last reason that you should buy this one of a kind stick is because you can use them as chopsticks. One way that you could use them as chopsticks is you get two sticks and them just pick your food up and it’s better to use sticks because, 1. It’s not plastic so it won’t break easily, 2. You won’t have to waste money and 3. They’re easier to hold. Imagine how you can eat sushi with them easier.

What are you waiting for, go get your stick from the closest forest and look after it because it will help you, save you and you can use them as chopsticks. No trees were harmed in the making of this stick.      

Change The Uniform

For writing we have been about persuasive writing and persuasive vocab. This is my writing about why we should not have school uniform.

Change The Uniform

Wearing a school uniform is a waste of money so we should get to pick our own clothes. If we pick our own clothes then we won’t have to go through all of the stress with finding a uniform.

Firstly, I think that we should pick our own clothes because there will be no stress with looking for a uniform, if you wear whatever you want then it will be easier to find clothes and you won’t get angry if you can’t find your uniform.m

Secondly, I think you should wear whatever you want is because it’s free to choose your own clothes and you can just pick anything out, also if you choose whatever you want then you could wear more layers to keep warm.

Lastly, I think that you should wear whatever you want is because you don’t have to waste money. If you wear whatever then no money will go down the drain, also it’s cheaper to buy normal clothes than uniform.

Overall I think that we should wear whatever we want because you don’t have to struggle looking for your uniform, you will be free to choose whatever and you won’t have to waste money.

The Protectful, Playful Pet

In writing we have been learning about Persuasive Writing.

We had to decide if Miss McLeod should get a cat or a dog for a pet.

We are learning about persuasive vocabulary and we had to highlight them in our work.

I think Miss McLeod should get a dog.

Please read my persuasive writing to find out why.

The Protectful Playful Pet

Did you know that dogs can be your private body guard?I think Miss Mcleod should get a dog because dogs can keep you safe. They can be entertaining, protectful and playful.

Firstly, I think that Miss Mcleod should get a dog because they are entertaining little fluffballs. They can be entertaining by running to you and they jump but they miss the couch. Another way that they could be entertaining is doing cool tricks. Some examples of them doing cool tricks could be them trying to jump through a hoop or open the door for you.

Secondly, I think that Miss Mcleod should buy a fluffy, goofy dog because they can be protectful like a superhero going to save the day. To be protectful they could warn you so that you can know that there is an intruder at your house. Another that they can protect you is that they could be your own tough, unbreakable, bone breaking body guard.

Lastly, I think Miss Mcleod should get a cute and fluffy dog because they can be playful. To play with them you could run around with their toy while they chase you to get it.  You can also play with them by when they are playing with their toy you could grab it and then drag it on the ground.

Overall, I think that Miss Mcleod should buy a dog because they can be entertaining, protect you and play with you.   

Go to your nearest pet and but one of these goofy, funny and protectful pets.