English Writing

One Christmas morning this 15 year old boy named Daniel woke his parents up really early so that he could open all of his presents, when he got into the living room he realised that their heaps of presents but only one of them was his. He said to his mum “I’ve only got one present”. He opened up the present and inside was barney the dinosaur, he got angry so he went up to his room. He was so angry that he made a plan to go on a killing spree because if he didn’t get presents then no one could. So he made a plan on a piece of paper and then he went to his dad’s room, grabbed the machine gun from underneath the bed and then walked out the door. He stole his mum’s bugatti, went to a ammunation shop so that he could buy a pistol and some ammo.

Finally he got back into the car and drove to Uri Rd where Rojan lived, Daniel knew Rojan really well so he decided to kill him first. He went up to Rojan’s house and shot him in the foot and then tied chains around his hands. Then he  snapped his fingers and he shot him in the head. Next he went to Hocking St and went to Kalim’s house, he shot him in the tit and then shot him about 100 times in the head. Last he went to Clemett Ave and went to Aiden’s house, he sprinted as fast as a cheetah to his house cause it was far away. When he got there he shot him in the chest 20 times. The cops came and arrested him, his last words to his family was I didn’t mean to kill them.